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by Yeahbuddylightweight
Fri Dec 17, 2010 8:42 pm
Forum: Visitor Articles
Topic: STEROIDS!!! AS AMERICAN AS APPLE PIE?
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I agree, it would be much easier to read if it had been formatted "cleaner" (I simply copied my Microsoft document into the body of the post). As for the errors, I have been revising the paper and hope to post a newer, error free essay. I would prefer mapping it out using an outline and doing more r...
by Yeahbuddylightweight
Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:42 pm
Forum: Visitor Articles
Topic: STEROIDS!!! AS AMERICAN AS APPLE PIE?
Replies: 7
Views: 21791

Dr. Serrano e-mailed my paper to James Griffing, who told me about the site. I am going to community college for the exact reason you explained. And you are right, my paper implements pathos all the way through. It could be a good thing, but it definitely needs work. I noticed in my most recent revi...
by Yeahbuddylightweight
Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:14 pm
Forum: Visitor Articles
Topic: STEROIDS!!! AS AMERICAN AS APPLE PIE?
Replies: 7
Views: 21791

STEROIDS!!! AS AMERICAN AS APPLE PIE?

Recent paper I wrote for my English class. I am currently a freshman at Columbus State Community College. Please don't discredit my work because I am a freshman or because I go to community college. :grin: American as Apple Pie January 23, 1984, American wrestler Hulk Hogan did the unthinkable. For ...